MetaHaiku

From Davidbond.net

A metahaiku:

Five, seven, five beat triad

Gist blooms through kigo

My hokku is laid.

Will gentle respect be warmed

and true renga hatch?

Reference is due:

From Toyomasu.com

/haiku springs truth

From here I can see

Storms above and wisps below.

Down there it's just "clouds"

There's structure and flow

Units, groups, work, rest and play:

But feelings? Call them.

The dangerous bits

On take off and on landing

The baby knows, cries.